White Snakes
the sea was sad and angry
it left something behind to remind everyone
nothing
and then thankfully, the night came
so that you could hide
disappear
watch the fog swirl
hear the footsteps echoin
the dark raindrops splatter
a happy suicide
the night .... didn't speak at all
but you could hear
feel the gusts
and you knew
the ghosts of memories
live
within you
you turn
and walk
away ?
it left something behind to remind everyone
nothing
and then thankfully, the night came
so that you could hide
disappear
watch the fog swirl
hear the footsteps echoin
the dark raindrops splatter
a happy suicide
the night .... didn't speak at all
but you could hear
feel the gusts
and you knew
the ghosts of memories
live
within you
you turn
and walk
away ?
posted by Semi-Evil Stranger at 3:54 AM
7 Comments:
hmmm - why such a sad and aching post for ur first entry?
>>and you knew
the ghosts of memories
live
within you
you turn
and walk
away ?
why do people do that?
San: I wrote it after a lot of beers :-D - don't you like the dark side now ? ;)
enl: because we are people, flawed n all ?
dark side to you is still very dark - can we atleast light a candle?
Nice! And 'bout time you wrote more, don't you think so mister?
...or did you forget to do that too? BTW re the derrier, as Sir Edmund said about the Himalayas, "because it is there"!
Cherie are you sayin yer dirrier is like the himalayas ?
id wasn't created for writing - it's for 'more interactive perving via commenting'
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